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I like it, too. There's something fun about it
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I take it this is from the new record? Daddy like.
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Wow, what a poorly-constructed argument. BF, you may have opted out of a few too many essay questions whilst in school. Let me help you out, buddy.
If you make an assertion you should demonstrate it with a preponderance of evidence where possible. You kind of did that with the firmware story (although I'm not sure any rational person would agree that because you had one iPod go wonky on you that Steve Jobs has raped you in the mouth...but whatever). It would have helped this point to have at least one additional story about how an iMac failed you, how your Nano konked out, or how a MacBook Pro had a bunch of dead pixels. You see? Once you establish a pattern of similar experiences, then your claim gains weight.
The customer service complaint wasn't backed up by any story. All you say there is that "as you will notice if you ever buy one of their products, is terrible with not only customer service..." Well, you've got to demonstrate that, m'boy. How is their customer service bad?
A point about structure: your second and third paragraphs basically say the same thing, containing the same points, and one lessens the impact of the other. Each paragraph should argue a single, unique element of the argument. Well-constructed arguments are very economical with their word usage and they rarely repeat themselves other than to sum up.
To sum up: have bucketloads of evidence, back up each assertion presented, and be sure each element of your argument gets its own paragraph.
Here endeth the lesson.
You're entirely welcome Shuac.
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Don King better watch his back with all the promoting you're doing lately! Thanks a mil!
i enter my comment, reload the page, and...
you even picked the same arcane kitchen utensil i did.
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What, was VideoMellonBaller taken?
Sorry I had to discard a "Fido" trailer I submitted, turns out it was a dupe. So I dont know how that may affect your playlist it was added to. Sorry for the confusion!
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Hey Pisser.
Just sayin' 'hey.'